Tag Archives: Deconstruction

Bitten: Detour (Chapter 20)

TW: Rapey Bitten: Detour (Chapter 20) When we last left off, Elena and Clay were fully clothed on the couch downstairs. When Elena wakes up, they’re both naked in her bed. Ew. I can’t even. Just. Ew. Nope. Not touching … Continue reading

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Bitten: Prisoner (Chapter 19)

When last we left our protagonists, Clay had abandoned Elena while she was at the bank. I could imagine only two reasons for them abandoning me. One, the meter maid had been making her rounds and neither had a nickel … Continue reading

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Bitten: Conviction (Chapter 18)

The title of this chapter is Conviction. I could talk about how the police show up and basically exonerate the pack because the body was killed elsewhere, or about how Jeremy feels he has to be perfect and strong at … Continue reading

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Bitten: Ambush (Chapter 17)

We are at the 50% mark, and we’ve got a plot, after a fashion! So of course we’re immediately derailed by Clay entering a “battle of wills” with Elena’s CAR. For chrissakes. When it hesitated, Clay rammed the gas pedal … Continue reading

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Bitten: Stalking (Chapter 16)

So at the end of the last chapter, Nick, Clay, and Elena decided to go drive out away from the murder scenes to go for a run and hunt deer. Apparently Nick is a professional playboy who squanders money with … Continue reading

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Bitten: Mistrust (Chapter 15)

The first thing the search party finds when looking for the missing human is Elena’s panties, as well as the shredded remains of her and Clay’s other clothing. So anyway. The human is dead, of course. Worse, Elena finds Clay’s … Continue reading

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Bitten: Synchronous (Chapter 14)

Trigger Warning: Rape, violent/painful sex. This is the chapter where I am officially Done With Elena. We rejoin our heroes upon their having returned from their narrow escape from the three mutts; the chapter begins in media res as Jeremy … Continue reading

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